tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post5786282280320083800..comments2023-04-05T05:36:05.156-07:00Comments on Orchards Windows Roses: 2073 Elm StreetJoanne Young Elliotthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-36888302943394160962011-11-17T10:11:07.556-08:002011-11-17T10:11:07.556-08:00Woman, you have not posted in a while!!! :)
But I...Woman, you have not posted in a while!!! :)<br /><br />But I respect that. <br /><br />And hope you are well.<br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-26654275037169929442011-09-01T03:02:31.307-07:002011-09-01T03:02:31.307-07:00There is a genuine sense of innocence in this Joan...There is a genuine sense of innocence in this Joanne. I loved it.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-18214485181949261872011-08-31T17:54:27.547-07:002011-08-31T17:54:27.547-07:00Thank you everyone for all your comments.Thank you everyone for all your comments.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-3745325492197550442011-08-31T17:41:02.631-07:002011-08-31T17:41:02.631-07:00That is so sad! Nice write.That is so sad! Nice write.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-47236924952075370542011-08-31T14:07:12.557-07:002011-08-31T14:07:12.557-07:00Fantastic that she kicked the sign ;) really great...Fantastic that she kicked the sign ;) really great!<br />DebAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11464524804643959314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-62577529125756471622011-08-31T07:37:46.987-07:002011-08-31T07:37:46.987-07:00Emotional and image-filled snapshot, a story told ...Emotional and image-filled snapshot, a story told with talent and heart. Lovely piece, Joanne.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-34810885436340215022011-08-30T23:02:12.794-07:002011-08-30T23:02:12.794-07:00Oh, I loved this. I hope the little girl did find ...Oh, I loved this. I hope the little girl did find a home there she could love :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-84936892111145700042011-08-30T20:51:25.836-07:002011-08-30T20:51:25.836-07:00You paint a photorealistic picture, that takes gre...You paint a photorealistic picture, that takes great skill. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-49953536741474632082011-08-30T17:23:14.559-07:002011-08-30T17:23:14.559-07:00This struck me as heartwretching. So many losing t...This struck me as heartwretching. So many losing their homes...kicking that sign.<br /><br />There is great motion in this poem....and it's haunting.<br /><br />Thank you..it certainly tickles the imagination.<br /><br />Lady NyoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-64583629911024197752011-08-30T17:22:49.775-07:002011-08-30T17:22:49.775-07:00Hope she made it home from her walk.Hope she made it home from her walk.Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-57405258393856950292011-08-30T16:52:36.321-07:002011-08-30T16:52:36.321-07:00A great observation of a 'walking home'A great observation of a 'walking home'Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-90360240279189663412011-08-30T16:25:04.274-07:002011-08-30T16:25:04.274-07:00Very understated, well-worded exposition of a plig...Very understated, well-worded exposition of a plight too many kids are facing now. That is, if she is going rather than coming, or perhaps ending somewhere not Home. Just my impression. I did see the unsmiling child quite clearly, regardless.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-44065029012983820632011-08-30T15:33:08.152-07:002011-08-30T15:33:08.152-07:00Ahhh the energy of youth. I have a 15 year old wh...Ahhh the energy of youth. I have a 15 year old who has so much energy, she wears me out! LOL<br />Lovely imagery in your prose.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-1356674062887612892011-08-30T13:32:19.757-07:002011-08-30T13:32:19.757-07:00Love the expression of thought through action. Don...Love the expression of thought through action. Don't we all give a little kick once-in-a-while?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-40892609331417894872011-08-30T13:32:01.258-07:002011-08-30T13:32:01.258-07:00great detail, I could picture it as I read....we a...great detail, I could picture it as I read....we all need find home :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-42599348969737877262011-08-30T12:56:49.289-07:002011-08-30T12:56:49.289-07:00I have a child like that. And she is my home.
Gre...I have a child like that. And she is my home.<br /><br />Great detail of a 12-year-old memory!! The ambiguity makes this soar for me.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-61396600855094210722011-08-30T12:55:50.101-07:002011-08-30T12:55:50.101-07:00blowing dandelion seeds, warmed with summer...that...blowing dandelion seeds, warmed with summer...that's just magical..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-87877597780369663802011-08-30T12:54:10.856-07:002011-08-30T12:54:10.856-07:00this is lovely...it left a little mystery, nicely ...this is lovely...it left a little mystery, nicely done.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-79629949622946103682011-08-30T12:47:41.689-07:002011-08-30T12:47:41.689-07:00Enjoyed the prose of this, it does leave a wonderi...Enjoyed the prose of this, it does leave a wondering...nicely done! ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-5656175484766070862011-08-30T12:37:41.037-07:002011-08-30T12:37:41.037-07:00always room to explore.. great writealways room to explore.. great writeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-29783733544377140942011-08-30T12:34:35.853-07:002011-08-30T12:34:35.853-07:00This is so rich and captivating. Lulling. Beautifu...This is so rich and captivating. Lulling. Beautiful penning!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-73868564081322462982011-08-30T12:33:27.087-07:002011-08-30T12:33:27.087-07:00Waltzing down the sidewalk...spreading the seed. H...Waltzing down the sidewalk...spreading the seed. Helping Nature in its need, little girl, skip on, skip on! I LIKED this a lot...steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-82524125345645399782011-08-30T12:28:01.748-07:002011-08-30T12:28:01.748-07:00Thank you all.
@Natasha I did see her 12 years ag...Thank you all.<br /><br />@Natasha I did see her 12 years ago. This girl on the edge of no longer being little. And I'm not sure what the kicking of the sign was about...so I left it kind of ambiguous. Thanks for you comment. :-)Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-51497237805588038232011-08-30T12:21:19.358-07:002011-08-30T12:21:19.358-07:00That bright orange sold haunts me in the "rea...That bright orange sold haunts me in the "real" world! :) Joanne, you always make your subjects so alive with your words...I could so see her! Awesome!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-377565675486592482.post-51274242616022539112011-08-30T12:19:59.554-07:002011-08-30T12:19:59.554-07:00I like her walk around before she goes home.
Swee...I like her walk around before she goes home.<br /><br />Sweet post ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com