an Equinox child now lay claim
to Virgo ways, though my soul
still lives in Libra.
Light changes, stands still
for a moment and I wonder
why I couldn’t wait for Autumn
instead was born on an afternoon
the moon in its dark phase,
the mystic’s vision inward
the Virgin gathering wheat
instead of scales weighing.
I anticipate this turn of season
this descent into darkness
to harvest, to ruminate, to learn,
to understand how to let go
a red leaf falling
falling a great distance
in order to return to the land
whose stars I was born under.
© 2012 Joanne Elliott
My mother left the U.S. when she met my father, a Canadian
from Nova Scotia. Near the end of her pregnancy with me they were visiting her
relatives in Detroit…I guess I decided that is where I wanted to be born and so
was born two weeks early. Many years later I returned to the U.S., though born
here I had never lived here until thirteen years ago. I moved to So Cal when I
met Charles/Beautyseer online.
This poem is dedicated to my parents and to both of
my homelands.
Hello, Joanne :)
ReplyDeleteI love learning more about my poet friends. Your poem and story are wonderful, beautiful work. I'm so glad I experienced your response to the NWCU posting.
Thank you Beth! And thank you for coming up with a great idea! I look forward to reading everyone's posts later today or tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteSo nice to learn more about you Joanne. What a beautiful poetic description of the season and signs of your birth.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susie!
DeleteVery nicely crafted Joanne! Really like the texture and feel of what you wrote! Especially the last part:
ReplyDelete"a red leaf falling
falling a great distance
in order to return to the land
whose stars I was born under."
Kudos,
Roger ☺
Thank you Roger!
DeleteThis is what really speaks to me:
ReplyDeleteI anticipate this turn of season
this descent into darkness
to harvest, to ruminate, to learn,
to understand how to let go
This is my Autumn...so perfectly it's another round of goosebumps...you guys have been pulling those shivers out of me all day. And now, you're my Motor City Maven! :) Loved this Joanne! And looking forward to sharing this new season with you :)
lol...Motor City Maven...love it! I'm glad you liked. I'm looking forward to sharing this new season with you, too.
DeleteFabulous :) really enjoyed reading you poem
ReplyDeleteThank you marousia!
DeleteInteresting observations and nice to hear the background to the poem
ReplyDeleteThank you John. :-)
DeleteLovely imagery! I was born on the last day of Gemini, on the cusp of a Cancer.
ReplyDeleteThere is something magical about the cusp...the in between...the twilight. Thank you for reading and commenting.
DeleteI'm a virgo - but have to go with the shades of autumn - lovely write Joanne - lib
ReplyDeleteHello fellow Virgo. Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)
DeleteLovely, thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading. :-)
DeleteThere is a beautiful flow and sense of continuity here, connecting you to your younger self and to those you love. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anna. :-)
Deletehey joanne, good to see you @ Dverse
ReplyDeleteHi Emanuel. Good to see you here too! I haven't been around dVerse much lately. Have you been posting on dVerse much? I'll be by to read your poem soon. :-)
Deletea season of understanding to let go...and in such a beautiful way...
ReplyDeleteThank you Claudia. :-)
DeleteArtful and revealing storytelling. This seasonal change in particular seems to inspire in ways that others do not. Maybe it's that thought of letting go. Very fine work here.
ReplyDeleteI love the moon, the golden and red colors, the falling leaf all I believe have symbolism in your life your world
ReplyDeleteand you are in So Cal where a few leaves turn yellow