Digs into dirt now thawed.
Baselines reasserted,
makes sure tops of boulders show through, 
ready to be tagged.
Wild grass reaching for blue
mowed down to playing level.
The rough, uneven ground slants 
slightly towards bushes and marsh; 
the graveyard for stitched leather.
Beads of sweat
drip into his eyes 
run down his muscled arms 
seep through his white tee.
The air chills him. 
He breathes deep
smells damp earth, cut grass, 
sweat.
One more round of the bases. 
A last sweep of the field. 
Need to make sure all is clear.
Safe.
Soon the kids will be back 
just like he was every year. 
Once the air starts to warm 
and the ground firms 
they gather, make teams, and throw
that first pitch. 
He remembers the way his hands
vibrated with the bat 
as it struck the ball.
Remembers the flight of white 
against blue sky. 
The feeling that this one is lost
in the bushes 
as his legs carried him home.
Days go by and Albert waits.
His friends are off playing real life, 
but sometimes he still finds himself 
at the edge of the field. 
Every day is warmer. He waits.
Then they come.
Bats and gloves in hand they ramble up
from down the hill
drift in like an early summer breeze. Ready.
One, he can see, has been waiting 
in the yard next door. 
The big kid who can’t run; 
his feet turned in too much for speed. 
Albert feels something inside 
when the kids let this boy play.
They know this kid can hit 
so get somebody to run the bases.
The boy’s slightly chubby arms 
look bigger bent in batter stance 
and when he swings 
you know he is going to connect 
and then he does.
As Albert watches 
he feels like it’s him standing there.
The boy and Albert 
not running in this moment
still seem to find freedom 
in giving their gift.
Free as the ball leaving the bat 
heading high into blue. 
It means 
they’re already home.
©2010 Joanne Young Elliott

 
 
So romantic...I love your imagery; how I can see it all happening. It's sentimental and sweet, but not saccharine. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Chels. My memories are fertile ground for poetry. I like to find the stories and embellish.
ReplyDeleteJoanne! I was completely caught up in this moment! I could see it all play out, and as a huge fan of vacant lot softball as a girl, you could have sung to me in a voice any more clear. I have stolen my memories back from this piece...and I thank you for that! Wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome and thanks Natasha. I didn't play, but was a fan. My brother was the one who couldn't run, but boy could he hit.
ReplyDeleteI love mining my memories for ideas. I started doing that more in the past couple of years. Memories make for rich soil to grow poems.
smiles. you do well with the stories...this one was touching for me and brought out some of my own memories...really a lovely share...
ReplyDeleteA very human narrative, with living characters in a coherent world, and description that puts the reader standing next to them. Enjoyed it much.
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian and Joy. I appreciate your comments.
ReplyDeleteTom Eliot:
ReplyDeleteThis poem just wraps the reader up in its blanket of skillfully described imagery.
An absolute pleasure to read. A real experience.
So glad you reposted this and shared this with us.
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift for telling a lovely story...and those ending lines are very uplifting.
also, thanks for your kind words in my blog; will check out that book that you mentioned...
happy day~
..the way t'wards the end really touches deep.. i don't think i can write a piece as romantic as yours... lucky you.. you can.. adorable write!(:
ReplyDelete~Kelvin
Thank you Heaven and Kelvin. :-)
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you Tom! :-)
ReplyDelete..it means they're already home...love this closure as it sums up the whole story so perfectly...very nicely played joanne
ReplyDeleteLovely write, coming from a family that lives on the field I felt so connected to this. ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteThank you Rose and Claudia.
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